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V27 Posted 21 years ago
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... and PLEASE have also a look on my CV

0 hello, could you also please correct the CV? 02br
00it's just about the language. 02br
00(I know, the layout makes it a bit diffucult to read) 02br
00Thank you very much. 02br
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00Veronika 02br
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00- Curriculum Vitae - 02br
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00Contact Information 02br
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00Address: *** 02br
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00 *** 02br
00Phone ?: 02br
00Cell Phone ?: 02br
00Email ?: 02br
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00Personal Information 02br
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00Date of Birth: *** 02br
00Place of Birth: *** 02br
00Citizenship: German 02br
00Marital status: unmarried 02br
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00Education and Training 02br
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00Secondary school: 1985 - 1992 02br
00 Albert-Schweitzer-POS (polytechnic secondary school) 02br
00 Chemnitz 02br
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00Grammar school: 1992 - 1997 02br
00 Werner-Heisenberg-Gymnasium Chemnitz 02br
00 general qualification for university entrance 02br
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00Professional training: September 1997 – February 2000 02br
00 German Telekom AG 02br
00 T-Com division Chemnitz/Leipzig 02br
00 office executive 02br
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00University: September 2001 – September 2004 02br
00 University of applied science for public administration Meißen 02br
00 {Dipl}. Verwaltungswirt (FH) 02br
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00 Diploma dissertation: “Regional Representation by the EU – Regional Offices in Brussels” 02br
00 {evaluation still in process} 02br
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00Seminar papers: “Foreigners in Germany – The demographic development from the legal and economical point of view” 02br
00 “Natural disasters management in Germany” 02br
00 “Germany in Europe – The European Integration Process and it’s Effects on Germany” 02br
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00Internships: 02br
00 Saxon Authority for Family and Social Chemnitz – organisation and information processing 02br
00 Municipality Chemnitz – trade taxes agency 02br
00 Representation Office of the Free State of Saxony Brussels – student research project 02br
00 Saxon Ministry of Economics Dresden – human resources 02br
00department 02br
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00Professional Experience 02br
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00February 2000 – April 2000 02br
00T-Mobile central office Leipzig 02br
00customer advisor back-office 02br
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00May 2000 – March 2001 02br
00School for mentally handicapped children Chemnitz 02br
00community service (in lieue of military service) 02br
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00April 2001 – August 2001 02br
00T-Mobile central office Leipzig 02br
00customer advisor back-office 02br
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00October 2004 – September 2005 02br
00University of Technology Chemnitz 02br
00advisor human resources department 02br
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00Professional Qualifications 02br
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00Computer skills: Word, Excel, Powerpoint, Access 02br
00HTML basic course 02br
00Certifications : AdA instructor course 02br
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00Languages 02br
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00English: good conversational 02br
00Russian: basic knowledge 0-
  

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0 Hi Veronika 02br 02br 00Essentially it's OK. However a potential employer looks at hundreds of these and you need to make yours stand out. 02br 02br 00Take lots of time over the layout.

— Mredgrove

  • 0 Hi Veronika 02br 02br 00Essentially it's OK.
  • However a potential employer looks at hundreds of these and you need to make yours stand out.
  • 02br 02br 00Take lots of time over the layout.
  • just in case that job you really fancy has a short deadline.
  • 02br 00Review all the time.....
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0 Hi Veronika 02br
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0Hi Mark-- welcome to English Forums. Thanks for helping out, and we hope to see more of you around here. 02br
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00I recommand you to re-write your educationnal and training, and experience paragraphs by stating first the most recent date instead of writing first your oldest date ( Imean by that, state first your university between sept 2001 and sept 2004, then sept 1997 feb 2000, ..., and last secondary school 1985.1992). When reading your resume, the employer find
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0 Thank you for having a look at my CV. 02br
00I thought about stating the most recent dates first, but I was not sure. It's not usual in Germany, but as I apply for european studies I will change it. 02br
00I also thought about what I can write for my interests. But there is nothing special (no much time besides working). The truth is: family and friends. But I don't thi
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0 you have never been part of a sport team, music group, or volunteer organization??..I think, if so, that you can mention it.. 0-
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