Even with these changes, the sentence is not very good. The reason for my deteriorating health is because of a virus I must have caught whilst on holiday that and/which has only been recently diagnosed now because of the condition I am in .
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ozzourtiThe reason for my deteriorating health is because of a virus I must have caught ...That is a major improvement.