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Goronsky Posted 12 years ago
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Would you use parentheses, instead of semicolons, in these? Again, I think number one looks better and cleaner. Your thoughts? And would you omit the serial comma as I did?

1. Attending the birthday party were Beth Ann (9), Garry (6) and Hector (5).

2. Attending the birthday party were Beth Ann, 9; Garry, 6; and Hector, 5.
  

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I agree: #1 is better. Also, a serial comma is unnecessary.

  • I agree: #1 is better.
  • Also, a serial comma is unnecessary.
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I agree: #1 is better. Also, a serial comma is unnecessary.

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