And in this age, much like every company or manufactory has to market its products, every man has to market his own capacity so as to win a place in such a society full of fierce competition.

I'm new here, but I don't get it. What's the question?

Welcome . I just want someone to check my sentence.~can you help me?

I would change it as below:

And in this age, much like every company or manufacturer has to market its products, every man has to market his own capacity, so as to win a place in this fiercely competitive society.

'such' does not refer to anything I can see, although it could have been mentioned earlier in the composition.
I'm not sure about 'manufactory', but in this context

Thank you very much~

Yiwei LiuAnd in this age, much like every company or manufactory has to market its products, every man has to market his own capacity so as to win a place in such a society full of fierce competition.

This is what would say:
In this stage and age, in order to secure / win a spot in this fiercely competitive society, every man has to market his ability and

Thank you very much!!!

dimsumexpressThis is what would say:In this stage and age, in order to secure / win a spot in this fiercely competitive society, every man has to market his ability and capacity, just as it would a company or a manufacturing company for its products.

dim, I think you mean ìn this day and age, in order to secure...

And I`m not sure if it is corr

dimsumexpressjust as it would a company or a manufacturing company for its products.

"it" is also incorrect in the quote above and the whole clause after the comma is, well... confusing.

English 1b3dim, I think you mean ìn this day and age, in order to secure...

English 1b3
Appreciate your suggestion. But If you are not sure, I suggest that you do some research before you post a comment.
I am confident what I posted is fine, just something you are not used to.

Paul Bartels"it" is also incorrect in the quote above and the whole clause after the comma is, well... confusing.

Hi Paul,
I don't see anything incorrect nor confusing about this construction.

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