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Levis1 Posted 9 years ago
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Is this OK: We witnessed firsthand rapidly melting glaciers while in Patagonia and abnormally warm tempuratures.

Shouldn't the sentence be structured differently?

We witnessed firsthand rapidly melting glaciers and abnormally warm temperatures while in Patagonia.

What's the difference?

  

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Your version is a vast improvement.

  • Your version is a vast improvement.
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Your version is a vast improvement.

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