Analysis of an argumentative essay

Hello,everyone!
I have just read an essay about eating disorders and its causes.
We all know that's the urgent problem nowdays, so, the author draws our attention to it once again.
Eating disorders are wide spread among females: looking at the models and actresses women want to look like they do. So, they start torturing themselves with diets and exercises. Sometimes these diets can lead to such eating disorders as anorexia, bulimia, and even binge eating. There are some other reasons for these ilnesses:
1)low self-esteem or dipression;
2)influence of the media;
3)abuse;
4)other people's remarks about a person's weight;
5)unfavorable relations with others.
But it can be really difficult to say what reason prevailes, in most cases an eating disorder is caused by a mix of them.
In the end, the author asks us not to look at skinny models and not to give up food to look like they do, but improve our souls. That is the only thing that matters.
THE ORIGINAL ESSAY:

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