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Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Analyses of sentences

6. EXT.57TH STREET
Andy walks, but she's moving against the pedestrian tide. We widen out to see Andy, buckling the flow like a salmon going upstream.
7. EXT.ELIAS-CLARKE
Andy stops and sees, looming in front of her, an elegant tower, Elias-Clarke.
Streaming into the building are the polished girls...
[From the movie "The Devil Wears Prada"]

I'd like to know if "the scene" is implied after "widen out."
And I'd like to know whether "looming in front of her" is a dangling participle phrase or a simple adjective phrase modifying "Elias-Clarke."
If it is an adjective phrase, I'd like to know why it is far before from the modified noun.
Thank you in advance for your help.
  

Top answer

" No: they spread out laterally from Andy. " It is not dangling. This is equivalent: Andy stops and sees an elegant tower, Elias-Clarke, looming in front of her.

  • " No: they spread out laterally from Andy.
  • " It is not dangling.
  • This is equivalent: Andy stops and sees an elegant tower, Elias-Clarke, looming in front of her.
  • park sang joon I'd like to know why it is far before from the modified noun.
  • It is a style choice.
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park sang joonI'd like to know if "the scene" is implied after "widen out."
No: they spread out laterally from Andy.
park sang joonAnd I'd like to know whether "looming in front of her" is a dangling participle phrase or a simple adjective phrase modifying "Elias-Clarke."
It is not dangling. This is equivalent:

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Thank you, Mr. Micawber, for your so very helpful answer. Emotion: smile
But I was wondering what it is "they" that can widen out by themselve
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park sang joont I was wondering what it is "they"
The 'We' in the text.

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