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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Ana is HIV..

Hi, can anyone please give your feedback?

Ana is HIV-positive and a former drug addict from Brooklyn. She struggles to overcome her drug addiction and dedicates herself to the fight against HIV infection in the black community. But her bigger battle may be to repair her fractured family.

  

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I don't see any problems with the above. You may just consider joining the last sentence with the one before: anonymous in the black communit y, b ut her bigger battle

— Teechr

  • I don't see any problems with the above.
  • You may just consider joining the last sentence with the one before: anonymous in the black communit y, b ut her bigger battle
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I don't see any problems with the above. You may just consider joining the last sentence with the one before:

anonymousin the black community, but her bigger battle
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