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Jadel Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
An opinion paragraph
A school is one of the most required building all over the world.
Some people think it's a good idea that schools last year round. However, in my opinion, studying year around is not a good idea for students to absorb information well. Students need to take a rest in order to renew their energy. Also, there must be enough time for them to participate in other activities to develop and acquire skills at other things. In conclusion, schools must not last year round.
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Some people think it's a good idea that schools last year round. However, in my opinion, studying year around is not a good idea for students to absorb information well. Students need to take a rest in order to renew their energy. Also, there must be enough time for them to participate in other activities to develop and acquire skills at other things. In conclusion, schools must not last year round.
Could you please check my paragraph?
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Jadel A school is one of the most required building all over the world. " It's a social/educational institution. In any case, that essay topic/question is unrealistic.
- Jadel A school is one of the most required building all over the world.
- " It's a social/educational institution.
- In any case, that essay topic/question is unrealistic.
- I've never heard of any one advocating a year-round school system.
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Jadel A school is one of the most required building all over the world.School is not a "building." It's a social/educational institution.
In any case, that essay topic/question is unrealistic. I've never heard of any one advocating a year-round school system.
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Some of the schools here are "year round", but the number of days in school (180) remains the same. It just means that they don't follow the traditional calendar with a long break in the summer and shorter breaks at Christmas and Easter. Instead they have short breaks spread through the year. This is said to be beneficial, as the long summer break tends to create a huge disruption in the learning
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