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Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

An odd sentence

Beloved pets not only relieve stress by lowering our blood pressure and heart rates, they also may prevent heart disease altogether.
[Source: Reading for Results Ninth Edition by Laraine Flemming]
I think "relieve stress" should switch place with "lowering out blood pressure and heart rate" with slight word form changing?relieve to relieving and lowering to lower?that the sentence can make sense.
I'd like to know what you think about this.
  

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park sang joon I think "relieve stress" should switch place with "lowering out blood pressure and heart rate" No, the sentence is quite logical as it is. Stress is less critical than heart disease.

  • park sang joon I think "relieve stress" should switch place with "lowering out blood pressure and heart rate" No, the sentence is quite logical as it is.
  • Stress is less critical than heart disease.
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park sang joonI think "relieve stress" should switch place with "lowering out blood pressure and heart rate"
No, the sentence is quite logical as it is. Stress is less critical than heart disease.
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Thank you, Mr.Micawber, for your kind answer.Emotion: smile
I think if we relieve our stress, as a result it, we can lower our blood pressure
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They are two separate afflictions in this passage; they do not have a cause-and-effect relationship here. Be sure that you are reading what is written, without incorporating other peripheral knowledge that you may possess.

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