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Dysphoria_ Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

An issue with Quotation.

The full quote is this:

"Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings; the stout blade stabbed through her fated flesh" (1055-1056).

The way I wrote the quote is this:

“Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings;” (1055). The mere description shows the joy in battle that Anglo-Saxon's enjoy and believe in so heavily, “The stout blade stabbed through her fated flash” (1056).

Is this wrong?

(My version of Beowulf is translated by Charles Kennedy, and the style of writing is MLA.)
  

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Hi, The full quote is this: "Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings; the stout blade stabbed through her fated flesh" (1055-1056). The way I wrote the quote is this: “Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings;” (1055). The mere description shows the joy in battle that Anglo-Saxon's enjoy and believe in so heavily, “The stout blade stabbed through her fated flash” (1056).

  • Hi, The full quote is this: "Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings; the stout blade stabbed through her fated flesh" (1055-1056).
  • The way I wrote the quote is this: “Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings;” (1055).
  • The mere description shows the joy in battle that Anglo-Saxon's enjoy and believe in so heavily, “The stout blade stabbed through her fated flash” (1056).
  • Is this wrong?
  • ) Here a couple of suggestions.
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Hi,
The full quote is this:

"Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings; the stout blade stabbed through her fated flesh" (1055-1056).

The way I wrote the quote is this:

“Thrust at the throat, broke through the bone-rings;” (1055). The mere description shows the joy in battle that Anglo-Saxon's enjoy and believe in so heavily, “The stout blade stab
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I have to leave my paper in present tense, so the ed's can't get put in. (I know "BAH! MLG!" - haha. I had to re-write my entire paper to fix that.)

And I was thinking that the semi-colon should be omitted also, but I'm not sure.

Sighness.

Thanks again^.^
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Good luck. I'm sure you'll do well.

Clive

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