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Contiluo Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

An integral home

Please help me make the sentences below sound natural. Thanks a lot.

  1. Home is a place where kids are dearly loved by their parents.
  2. Home is a place where provides food and clothing.
  3. Home is always a haven for children.
  4. Home is a place where you can rest after you snivel tiredly.
  5. Home is a place where you don’t have a nightmare.
  6. Home is a supply station of family affection.
  7. Home is a place where it can shelter you from the rain and the wind forever.
  8. Home is a place where you can happily learn and live.
  9. Xiucai is an integral home for children.
  

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I found some mistakes in the original post. I have rewritten the sentences as follows: Home is a place where kids are dearly loved by their parents. Home is a place that provides food and clothing.

  • I found some mistakes in the original post.
  • I have rewritten the sentences as follows: Home is a place where kids are dearly loved by their parents.
  • Home is a place that provides food and clothing.
  • Home is usually a haven for children.
  • Home is a place where you can rest when you are tired and emotionally worn out from crying.
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I found some mistakes in the original post. I have rewritten the sentences as follows:

  1. Home is a place where kids are dearly loved by their parents.
  2. Home is a place that provides food and clothing.
  3. Home is usually a haven for children.
  4. Home is a place where you can rest when you are tired and emotionally worn out from crying.
  5. Home is a place where you

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