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Jasan is always late for school. Last Sunday, he watched television until midnight, so he woke up late (the) next day. He was cycling in a hurry on the way to school. Suddenly, he did not see a big stone in the middle of the road. He knocked the stone / it accidentally and lost his balance.
He suddenly fell down from the bicycle. He cried out in pain loudly and shouted for help. He could not walk at all because his knee was hurt. It / He was bleeding profusely and waiting patiently for someone / anyone came to help him. Jasan was as calm as _________ at that moment.
Fortunately, a man walked past the place. He heard Jasan's cried / cry and stopped (his car) to help. He saw Jason lying on the ground, without hesitation, sent him to hospital nearby. Jasan was grateful to the kind man. He expressed his gratitude to the man for helping him. He promised that he would not watch television until midnight again.
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