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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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An incident happened in the laboratory
Please help me to check, thanks.
Peter was a Year 4 pupil. Science is the subject he likes the most. One day,
during the science (lesson), he was attentively doing an experiment in a laboratory.
Peter was in a group of three in the laboratory. When he was holding a test-tube (going to test the result), he accidentally slipped and broke it (on the floor). At that moment, he was very scared and did not know what to do.
His science teacher, Mr Lim, came to him. He helped Peter pick the pieces of glass and throw them in / into the dustbin. He just warned them to be careful next time.
Peter had learnt a lesson from the incident.
Peter was a Year 4 pupil. Science is the subject he likes the most. One day,
during the science (lesson), he was attentively doing an experiment in a laboratory.
Peter was in a group of three in the laboratory. When he was holding a test-tube (going to test the result), he accidentally slipped and broke it (on the floor). At that moment, he was very scared and did not know what to do.
His science teacher, Mr Lim, came to him. He helped Peter pick the pieces of glass and throw them in / into the dustbin. He just warned them to be careful next time.
Peter had learnt a lesson from the incident.
Top answer
Hi Vincent, Peter was a 4 year old pupil. Science(1) was the subject he liked (the) most. One day, during a science lesson/class, he was attentively doing an experiment in a/the (2) lab.
- Hi Vincent, Peter was a 4 year old pupil.
- Science(1) was the subject he liked (the) most.
- One day, during a science lesson/class, he was attentively doing an experiment in a/the (2) lab.
- Peter was in a group of three in the laboratory.
- While he was holding a test-tube he slipped(3) and broke it.
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Hi Vincent,
Peter was a 4 year old pupil. Science(1) was the subject he liked (the) most. One day, during a science lesson/class, he was attentively doing an experiment in a/the (2) lab.
Peter was in a group of three in the laboratory. While he was holding a test-tube he slipped(3) and broke it. At that moment, he was very scared and did not know what to do.
His science
Peter was a 4 year old pupil. Science(1) was the subject he liked (the) most. One day, during a science lesson/class, he was attentively doing an experiment in a/the (2) lab.
Peter was in a group of three in the laboratory. While he was holding a test-tube he slipped(3) and broke it. At that moment, he was very scared and did not know what to do.
His science
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IvanhrPeter was a 4 year old pupil.
It doesn't seem a right correction to me.
Regards.
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ecopsyIvanhrPeter was a 4 year old pupil.
It doesn't seem a right correction to me.
Regards.
You're right. I assumed that it was a reference to his age.
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