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Vincent Teo Posted 16 years ago
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One day, Peter was on the way home from school. Suddenly, he heard a sound who was shouting for help. Then, he walked on to find (out) who was yelling.
When he walked to the river bank, Peter saw a girl. She was struggling because she as going to drown. Peter put down his bag and rushed to the river to save the girl.
Peter jumped into the river to save the girl from drowning. He carried the giel to the beach and her parents were waiting for them. Her parents was happy. They thanked Peter because he saved their daughter lives. That day, Peter was very happy because he had saved the girl's live.
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An incident at the river
Please help me to correct them, thanks!!
One day, Peter was on the way home from school. Suddenly, he heard a sound who was shouting for help. Then, he walked on to find (out) who was yelling.
When he walked to the river bank, Peter saw a girl. She was struggling because she as going to drown. Peter put down his bag and rushed to the river to save the girl.
Peter jumped into the river to save the girl from drowning. He carried the giel to the beach and her parents were waiting for them. Her parents was happy. They thanked Peter because he saved their daughter lives. That day, Peter was very happy because he had saved the girl's live.
Top answer
Suddenly, he heard the sound of someone [who was] shouting for help. ) When he reached the river bank / arrived at the river bank She was struggling as if she might drown. Her parents were happy.
- Suddenly, he heard the sound of someone [who was] shouting for help.
- ) When he reached the river bank / arrived at the river bank She was struggling as if she might drown.
- Her parents were happy.
- He saved their daughter's life.
- He had saved the girl's life.
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Suddenly, he heard the sound of someone [who was] shouting for help.
(He would more likely run in this situation!)
When he reached the river bank / arrived at the river bank
She was struggling as if she might drown.
Her parents were happy.
He saved their daughter's life.
He had saved the girl's life.
(He would more likely run in this situation!)
When he reached the river bank / arrived at the river bank
She was struggling as if she might drown.
Her parents were happy.
He saved their daughter's life.
He had saved the girl's life.
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