It depends on how improvement is used in the sentence. Improvements or an improvement are both possible. Without contexts, I would say "an" is not needed for "acupuncture".
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snvplayerWould it be also correct to say "...saw IMPROVEMENT in their health after..." instead of "an improvement"?Yes, that is an option.