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Turnem Posted 18 years ago
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Hello everybody, here is an excerpt from my writings. The following sentences are giving me headache, any suggestions or tips highly appreciated.

"Like as a nightmare can sometimes tells us that something is really wrong with the reality, this scary snake reminded me that something is very wrong about me, that the mood that I am getting into today, as sinking deeper, is not the right course for my boat. I remembered that after saying goodbye to the tree wonderful persons, cheerful and pleasant, full of life’s joy and adventure."
  

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turnem Hello everybody, here is an excerpt from my writings. The following sentences are giving me headache, any suggestions or tips highly appreciated. " Like Just as a nightmare can sometimes tells tell us that something is really wrong with the reality, this scary snake reminded me that something is very wrong about with me, that the mood that I am getting into today , as sinking deeper, is not the right course for my boat.

— Feebs11

  • turnem Hello everybody, here is an excerpt from my writings.
  • The following sentences are giving me headache, any suggestions or tips highly appreciated.
  • " Like Just as a nightmare can sometimes tells tell us that something is really wrong with the reality, this scary snake reminded me that something is very wrong about with me, that the mood that I am getting into today , as sinking deeper, is not the right course for my boat.
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turnemHello everybody, here is an excerpt from my writings. The following sentences are giving me headache, any suggestions or tips highly appreciated.

"Like Just as a nightmare can sometimes tells tell us that something is really wrong with the reality, this scary snake reminded me that something is very wrong about
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Feebs, I don't understand why you have used "tell" when the subject "a nightmare" is singular?
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Hi thanks very much for your opinions.
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BEcause the sentence used "can". It can tell us or It tells us.
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What a stupid question I have asked! Sorry!!
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