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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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An essay for harvard - please help at one sentence
A HARVARD APPLICATION ESSAY FOR LEADERSHIP EXPERIENCES
During my past career, a relatively dynamic and multifunctional one, I have exercised a number of formal leaderships.
Though these leadership experiences were as diverse as from managing a 3 persons courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross border USD bank notes shipment /equivalent of 6 million USD/ from China to Mongolia by taking a public land transportation in a critical situation, when the airplane has been delayed, to being in charge of a whole bank, the most vivid and difficult leadership experiences for me were informal leaderships. These are the type of leadership, where no money is involved and no formal authority is given.
PLEASE I AM STUCK WITH THE SENTENCE IN BOLD. HOW TO MAKE IT STRUCTURALLY SOUND?
I am going to start discussing my informal leadership experiences but I also want them to get suprised /deliberatly/ at my very interesting formal leadership roles.
I APPRECIATE YOUR HELP FRIEND...
During my past career, a relatively dynamic and multifunctional one, I have exercised a number of formal leaderships.
Though these leadership experiences were as diverse as from managing a 3 persons courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross border USD bank notes shipment /equivalent of 6 million USD/ from China to Mongolia by taking a public land transportation in a critical situation, when the airplane has been delayed, to being in charge of a whole bank, the most vivid and difficult leadership experiences for me were informal leaderships. These are the type of leadership, where no money is involved and no formal authority is given.
PLEASE I AM STUCK WITH THE SENTENCE IN BOLD. HOW TO MAKE IT STRUCTURALLY SOUND?
I am going to start discussing my informal leadership experiences but I also want them to get suprised /deliberatly/ at my very interesting formal leadership roles.
I APPRECIATE YOUR HELP FRIEND...
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My suggestion: These leadership experiences have been diverse. They include managing a 3-person courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross-border USD bank notes shipment (to the value of 6 million USD) from China to Mongolia by taking public land transportation in a critical situation when the airplane concerned was grounded, and being in charge of a whole bank. The most vivid and challenging leadership experiences for me were informal leaderships , where no money was involved and no formal authority was given .
- My suggestion: These leadership experiences have been diverse.
- They include managing a 3-person courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross-border USD bank notes shipment (to the value of 6 million USD) from China to Mongolia by taking public land transportation in a critical situation when the airplane concerned was grounded, and being in charge of a whole bank.
- The most vivid and challenging leadership experiences for me were informal leaderships , where no money was involved and no formal authority was given .
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My suggestion:
These leadership experiences have been diverse. They include managing a 3-person courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross-border USD bank notes shipment (to the value of 6 million USD) from China to Mongolia by taking public land transportation in a critical situation when the airplane concerned was grounded, and being in char
These leadership experiences have been diverse. They include managing a 3-person courier team that was assigned to bring the first ever cross-border USD bank notes shipment (to the value of 6 million USD) from China to Mongolia by taking public land transportation in a critical situation when the airplane concerned was grounded, and being in char
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