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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Could you correct my essay?
Do you prefer to travel alone or with others?
We all have different likes and dislikes. Some people enjoy traveling alone, but as for me I prefer the latter.
I think it's far better to travel with someone you know than alone. While exploring new and interesting places you can share your impressions with you friends when they are with you. In my opinion sharing impressions is very important, as it makes such an experience even more interesting.
Going to a foreign country can be dangerous as well. This is why going abroad with your friends is much safer. While visiting a foreign country you can expolore places of interests together.
It is always better to spend time with those you love than alone and make such an experience something to remember.
In my opinion it's too short.
Thanks
Could you correct my essay?
Do you prefer to travel alone or with others?
We all have different likes and dislikes. Some people enjoy traveling alone, but as for me I prefer the latter.
I think it's far better to travel with someone you know than alone. While exploring new and interesting places you can share your impressions with you friends when they are with you. In my opinion sharing impressions is very important, as it makes such an experience even more interesting.
Going to a foreign country can be dangerous as well. This is why going abroad with your friends is much safer. While visiting a foreign country you can expolore places of interests together.
It is always better to spend time with those you love than alone and make such an experience something to remember.
In my opinion it's too short.
Thanks
Top answer
Dear Mikka: You are correct; it's way too short. I use the American spelling of "travelling". Avoid phrases such as 'in my opinion', 'I think', 'as it makes'.
- Dear Mikka: You are correct; it's way too short.
- I use the American spelling of "travelling".
- Avoid phrases such as 'in my opinion', 'I think', 'as it makes'.
- They are superfluous.
- Decide if you are writing about travelling with one person or a group.
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Dear Mikka:
You are correct; it's way too short.
I use the American spelling of "travelling". Avoid phrases such as 'in my opinion', 'I think', 'as it makes'. They are superfluous.
Decide if you are writing about travelling with one person or a group. Remain consistent throughout your text once you have decided.
Do you prefer to travel alone or with others
You are correct; it's way too short.
I use the American spelling of "travelling". Avoid phrases such as 'in my opinion', 'I think', 'as it makes'. They are superfluous.
Decide if you are writing about travelling with one person or a group. Remain consistent throughout your text once you have decided.
Do you prefer to travel alone or with others
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