An Email

This is my writing about an email. I hope to receive many feedbacks from everyone. Many thanks.

Dear Mr. Green,
I love playing sports a lot, so I am very pleased to hear that you are going to organize a school sports day for our class.
In my opinion, I prefer to have running races due to the fact that it's more exciting and everyone can take part in this sport. Of course, the prize must have in order to award to the best runners in the competition. Actually, it is a kind of motivation for our class to engage. That's really great if our parents can come and enjoy the day with us.
That's all my thoughts about the event. I am looking forward to seeing and considering.
Best wishes,
John