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Israfil Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
An elf stands before the all
What is the grammatically problems here:
"1: An elf stands before the all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by the judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I don't swear by the conscience spirit'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves like an army of enemies'."
"7: 'Nothing can not comes from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything come from the God'."
"9: 'The God created the goodness'."
"10: 'And the God created the evil too'."
"11: 'God bless you all'."
"1: An elf stands before the all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by the judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I don't swear by the conscience spirit'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves like an army of enemies'."
"7: 'Nothing can not comes from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything come from the God'."
"9: 'The God created the goodness'."
"10: 'And the God created the evil too'."
"11: 'God bless you all'."
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I have underlined some problem areas. " For the rest, the language is dated or literary; it may stand.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- " For the rest, the language is dated or literary; it may stand.
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I have underlined some problem areas. See if you can correct them:
1: An elf stands before the all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by the judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I don't swear by the conscience spirit
1: An elf stands before the all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by the judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I don't swear by the conscience spirit
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What about these:
"1: An elf stand before all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I do not swear by the spirit of conscience'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves li
"1: An elf stand before all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I do not swear by the spirit of conscience'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves li
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I have fixed two and underlined other problems:
1: An elf stand before all."
7: 'Nothing can not come from nothing'."-- The logic here is a conundrum
"8: 'Everything had came from the ***'."
"9: '*** created goodness'."
"10: 'And *** created evil too'."
The other sentences are OK.
1: An elf stand before all."
7: 'Nothing can not come from nothing'."-- The logic here is a conundrum
"8: 'Everything had came from the ***'."
"9: '*** created goodness'."
"10: 'And *** created evil too'."
The other sentences are OK.
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I have tried to fix the problems:
"1: An elf stands before all."
"7: 'Nothing can comes from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything came from the ***'."
"1: An elf stands before all."
"7: 'Nothing can comes from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything came from the ***'."
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"1: An elf stands before all."
"7: 'Nothing can come from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything came from ***'."
"7: 'Nothing can come from nothing'."
"8: 'Everything came from ***'."
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Thank you, the work will be:
"1: An elf stands before all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I do not swear by the spirit of conscience'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves like an army of
"1: An elf stands before all."
"2: With a voice of one crying in the wilderness,"
"3: 'I do not swear by judgment day'."
"4: 'When the moon shall be turned into blood, and blood shall come upon the earth like dew'."
"5: 'I do not swear by the spirit of conscience'."
"6: 'When the stars shall be seen to fight among themselves like an army of
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If you want a final check, then you should post them in paragraph form.
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Put your sentences all together in one paragraph (I presume that that is what they were originally: a single story.)
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I wrote it and I quoted some verses from more than one book,I made the paragraph to be consists of verses,I will be in my writting mode and I will make another new one, I hope you like it.
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