an cover letter. help me, please

Hello, I am a girl from Hong kong. My friend just told me here. Well, it is a great forums with great people! I would like to be your friend.

Ok, I am writing a cover letter for a job, but I still dislike this letter very much.Could you give me a hand?

Thank you in advance.



Dear Sir or Madam:

As I known you company is involved in ……,my wish would be to work at /name of the company/ , for which I believe to have the necessary experience and skills, especially, in purchasing/sourcing to Asaian countries.





My college internship was taken in Hongkong EnglishFirst. I was engaged in the establishment of one branch school. My responsibilities were about advertising, local area network construction and opening celebration preparation. Later, as a sales worker, I worked at consulting with customers to sell EF's language courses.

Another internship was in 2002 , and I was working in XXX Ltd., a leading company active in China mainland's cotton and cotton-machinery fields. I was undertaking work on purchasing semi-manufactured machine parts, negotiations with presented suppliers, and selecting& evaluating new manufactures. This experience has given me a deeply understanding to do business in Chinamainland.



Studying in .. University has upgraded my skills on cross-cultural business, marketing, competitive strategies, supply chain, etc. Because of my favorite interest, I have made deeply study in my college thesis: Sourcing to China. Meanwhile, I was the group leader in two project groups, by which I improved my communication and managerial abilities.



My personal strengths are a positive attitude, team spirit. In addition, I am a diligent worker and a fast leaner. So, I am confident to face any challenge, and I am confident to be a qualified worker and contributor to you.



I am available for interviews. Thank you for your time and consideration.



Yours Sincerely,

Stela