an argumentative essay

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Now we have a lot of places, to work. Each of us want to choose the most useful, high-paid and needed professions. So, I would like to tell, which professions are most needed in Estonia now.

First of all, most needed profession is the teacher. Because teachers are one of the biggest world heroes. Teachers dedicate their lifes, like parents, to childrens. Only Teachers can teach so perfectly, that people will know everything. And nowadays it is really difficult to become a teacher, because you have to know a lot and to study very hard. The younger generation don’t want be teachers. Reason is that Estonia gives very low payment.

Secondly, most needed profession is the doctor. Human it is very intricated mechanism, which need constant control. Doctor it is irreplaceable profession in our everyday life. Doctor it is a person , who will help us to cope with illness. In Estonia doctors earn less money, that's why a lot of them go to Germany or Finland to work and to earn their living.

In addition, in developing countries like Estonia, big attention is concentrated to building. It is the reason that Estonia needed a lot of engineers, also another kinds of engineers are required too, due to fast developing of industry.

In my opinion teachers, doctors and engineers are important in our life, because they are base of modern society.