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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
An Amazing Flight
The following paragraph is fictitous. Please help me correct the errors or the illogical phrases. Thanks!
After a long night flying last night, I unknowingly fell asleep. When I woke up in the next morning, I found that the surroundings had been changed. I was placed in a big city which stood in great number of soaring buildings. Suddenly two sparrows flew pass by, and they warned me, “Watch out for the cars and the crowds, or they might expose you to mortal danger.” No sooner had they told me that than a gale blew me into a big road. As they said, there were tons of people and cars streaming on the road. Unfortunately, while I was walking along the roadside, a galloping car hit me. I performed my magic power to evade the fatal crisis. Flying along the winds, I hid myself in the hood of the car. Soon after, I escaped from the hood and got into the shutgun of the car. A little girl could not help but burst out sneezing when I pass by her. So, I flew out of the car and restarted my flying adventure.
After a long night flying last night, I unknowingly fell asleep. When I woke up in the next morning, I found that the surroundings had been changed. I was placed in a big city which stood in great number of soaring buildings. Suddenly two sparrows flew pass by, and they warned me, “Watch out for the cars and the crowds, or they might expose you to mortal danger.” No sooner had they told me that than a gale blew me into a big road. As they said, there were tons of people and cars streaming on the road. Unfortunately, while I was walking along the roadside, a galloping car hit me. I performed my magic power to evade the fatal crisis. Flying along the winds, I hid myself in the hood of the car. Soon after, I escaped from the hood and got into the shutgun of the car. A little girl could not help but burst out sneezing when I pass by her. So, I flew out of the car and restarted my flying adventure.
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what is it shut gun, shotgun????
- what is it shut gun, shotgun????
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I don't make sure whether it is correct or not. It means the front seat beside the driver's seat. However, I rewrite the paragraph as following.
After a long night's flying last night, I unknowingly fell asleep. When I woke up the next morning, I found that my surroundings had changed. I was in a big city with many soaring buildings. Suddenly two sparrows flew by, and they warned me,
After a long night's flying last night, I unknowingly fell asleep. When I woke up the next morning, I found that my surroundings had changed. I was in a big city with many soaring buildings. Suddenly two sparrows flew by, and they warned me,
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