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Chiachen Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

American English

Please help correct following writing exercise: Good work man!! Tomorrow, I'm going to buy cookies, potato chips and pop corn. You could buy drinks like soda, juice and beer. Ok, I have an idea! Let's do this. Tomorrow, I'll pick you up and we're going grocery shopping. We can decide then, what are useful to buy for the party!! I'll be at your home around 10:00 a.m. ok? And don't be late as usual!!
  

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The e-mail reply for planning a surprise party with a friend. Is it be better: Good work, man!! I'm going to buy cookies, potato chips and pop corn.

— Chiachen

  • The e-mail reply for planning a surprise party with a friend.
  • Is it be better: Good work, man!!
  • I'm going to buy cookies, potato chips and pop corn.
  • You could buy drinks like soda, juice and beer.
  • OK, I have an idea!
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The e-mail reply for planning a surprise party with a friend. Is it be better: Good work, man!! I'm going to buy cookies, potato chips and pop corn. You could buy drinks like soda, juice and beer. OK, I have an idea! Let's do this. Tomorrow, I'll pick you up and we're going to do some grocery shopping. We can then decide what we need for the party!! I'll be at your house around 10 a.m. O
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It's not a good subject I chose. It should be just: Correct writing? Please help!
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Will be waiting patiently for an answer! Thank you to all you great teachers! I am very grateful for your help.
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