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Anandan Posted 21 years ago
Letter Writing
Amend my letter and make it as professional way
Hi,
Anyone can help me to amend my letter to make it as professional letter. Actually I am writing a letter to the Immigration officer for not producing certain documents. The letter is as follows...
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Dear Immigration Officer,
I would like to apply long-term visit pass for my wife and son. In order to appy for long-term visit pass, CPF contribution history for the last 12 months is required which is not possible for me to produce since I obtained my Singapore Permanent Resident in October 2004. Consequently, I can produce last 3 months CPF contribution only.
I seek for your kind co-operation to approve the above-mentioned application
Thank you,
Yours Sincerely,
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Anyone can help me to amend my letter to make it as professional letter. Actually I am writing a letter to the Immigration officer for not producing certain documents. The letter is as follows...
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Dear Immigration Officer,
I would like to apply long-term visit pass for my wife and son. In order to appy for long-term visit pass, CPF contribution history for the last 12 months is required which is not possible for me to produce since I obtained my Singapore Permanent Resident in October 2004. Consequently, I can produce last 3 months CPF contribution only.
I seek for your kind co-operation to approve the above-mentioned application
Thank you,
Yours Sincerely,
***
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Top answer
Hi Anandan, Welcome to English Forums. Here you go: 'Dear Immigration Officer, I would like to apply for a long-term visitor's pass for my wife and son. In order to apply for one, I understand that a CPF contribution history for the previous 12 months is required; however, this is not possible for me to produce at this time, since I obtained my Singapore Permanent Resident status only in October 2004.
- Hi Anandan, Welcome to English Forums.
- Here you go: 'Dear Immigration Officer, I would like to apply for a long-term visitor's pass for my wife and son.
- In order to apply for one, I understand that a CPF contribution history for the previous 12 months is required; however, this is not possible for me to produce at this time, since I obtained my Singapore Permanent Resident status only in October 2004.
- Consequently, I can produce evidence of the last three months' CPF contribution only.
- I seek for your kind consideration in approving the above-mentioned application.
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Hi Anandan,
Welcome to English Forums. Here you go:
'Dear Immigration Officer,
I would like to apply for a long-term visitor's pass for my wife and son. In order to apply for one, I understand that a CPF contribution history for the previous 12 months is required; however, this is not possible for me to produce at this time, since I obtained my Singapore Permane
Welcome to English Forums. Here you go:
'Dear Immigration Officer,
I would like to apply for a long-term visitor's pass for my wife and son. In order to apply for one, I understand that a CPF contribution history for the previous 12 months is required; however, this is not possible for me to produce at this time, since I obtained my Singapore Permane
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