Please read through the paragraph and make corrections where you find mistakes. Please guide me to the correct use of punctuation. I'm very weak in the area - will! I'm not very good at the others either.
Thanks.
I took this selfie last year. My childhood friend, XXX, invited me and AAA to lunch at her home. I don't remember the exact month and the date, but the day must be a Sunday, as we always meet on a Sunday. I and AAA went there together in a rickshaw (poor people). We enjoyed ourselves a lot there - we often do when all the three of us are together. Despite of her disability XXX made three different dishes for us - applause for her. After we had the lunch, we started taking group pictures and selfies, that we usually forget to do when we are together. AAA is very jolly; when I was taking the selfie she held her hand in front of my face. I ignored her and took the selfie. When we saw he selfie we were amazed to see that it was the most beautiful picture ever - as you can see that. We laughed at this together and showed it to XXX. She, too, was surprised to see the beauty of the picture. After that we had the desert. Then we had a friendly chit chat till 5 pm. Then she served us tea, and I was surprised to see that XXX served me coffee. I don't know how she knew that I don’t like drinking tea as I once did. Then we left for our homes together. Until this day I'm trying to take a selfie like that but I never succeeded.
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