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Avid learner Posted 15 years ago
Amateur poetry
Hi,
I am making poetries just as a hobby, here are some of them. I wonder are they grammatically correct?
Set 1
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Your soothing beauty lingers in my heart
Your gentle smile persists in my eyes
Your soft whispers hover in my soul
Alas,
To be torn from your love is my unjust reality
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Set 2
Your frolics are engraved in my eyes
Your afflictions are embrued in my mind
Your fellowship is etched in my heart
Your departure at 14 is embedded in my memory
Thanks
I am making poetries just as a hobby, here are some of them. I wonder are they grammatically correct?
Set 1
---
Your soothing beauty lingers in my heart
Your gentle smile persists in my eyes
Your soft whispers hover in my soul
Alas,
To be torn from your love is my unjust reality
---
Set 2
Your frolics are engraved in my eyes
Your afflictions are embrued in my mind
Your fellowship is etched in my heart
Your departure at 14 is embedded in my memory
Thanks
Top answer
You should try to punctuate them just as we do prose sentences.
- You should try to punctuate them just as we do prose sentences.
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You should try to punctuate them just as we do prose sentences.
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1. Your soothing beauty lingers in my heart
2. Your gentle smile persists in my eyes
3. Your soft whispers hover in my soul
Alas,
4. To be torn from your love is my unjust reality
---
Set 2
5. Your frolics are engraved in my eyes
6. Your afflictions are embrued in my mind
7. Your fellowship is etched in my hear
2. Your gentle smile persists in my eyes
3. Your soft whispers hover in my soul
Alas,
4. To be torn from your love is my unjust reality
---
Set 2
5. Your frolics are engraved in my eyes
6. Your afflictions are embrued in my mind
7. Your fellowship is etched in my hear
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No, no - not number them, punctuate them! With commas, m-dashes and periods, etc.
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