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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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Am I wrong with this....?

Hi, Just help me to correct this sentence. I appreciate it.

She was so excellent for last writing test that whose paper was used to be a model in class.
  

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Hello Anon As your question is left unanswered, I'd like to put in my two cents, though I myself am leaner. You can be sure some native speakers will correct me if I make a serious mistake. She was so excellent for last writing test that whose paper was used to be a model in class.

— Paco2004

  • Hello Anon As your question is left unanswered, I'd like to put in my two cents, though I myself am leaner.
  • You can be sure some native speakers will correct me if I make a serious mistake.
  • She was so excellent for last writing test that whose paper was used to be a model in class.
  • * I'd say 'excellent in (or at)' rather 'excellent for'.
  • * 'Last writing test' should be modified by 'the' * 'Whose paper' should be 'her paper'.
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Hello Anon

As your question is left unanswered, I'd like to put in my two cents, though I myself am leaner. You can be sure some native speakers will correct me if I make a serious mistake.

She was so excellent for last writing test that whose paper was used to be a model in class.
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Paco2004Hello Anon

As your question is left unanswered, I'd like to put in my two cents, though I myself am leaner. You can be sure some native speakers will correct me if I make a serious mistake.

She was so excellent for last writing test that whose paper was used to be a model in class.
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