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Growing up in Philadelphia was fun. My mother has eight kids, therefore I always had playmates.
Running around the neighborhood, and walking to Center City would be an everyday adventure. The Parade's on Broad Street, with the different costume's, dancing, and excitement is a childhood memory that I'll never forget even in adulthood.
Seafood was, and will forever be my favorite food.
  

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Growing up in Philadelphia was fun. My mother had eight kids ; therefore I always had playmates. Running around the neighborhood, and walking to Center City would be an everyday adventure.

  • Growing up in Philadelphia was fun.
  • My mother had eight kids ; therefore I always had playmates.
  • Running around the neighborhood, and walking to Center City would be an everyday adventure.
  • The parades on Broad Street, (no comma) with the different costumes , dancing, and excitement is a childhood memory that I'll never forget even in adulthood.
  • Seafood was, and will forever be , my favorite food.
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Growing up in Philadelphia was fun. My mother had eight kids; therefore I always had playmates.
Running around the neighborhood, and walking to Center City would be an everyday adventure. The parades on Broad Street, (no comma) with the different costumes, dancing, and excitement is a childhood memory that I'll n

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