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Ehsan Samimi Posted 10 years ago
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Am I correct or not?
Can Someone help me please about my below email, its correct or not?
Dear sir
As per Emailing discussed with ALEX MAYER the XYZ Company want to renewal their Internet contract, so Please send me the mentioned Company Internet charges all summary sheet.
I am looking forward to your response as soon as possible.
Dear sir
As per Emailing discussed with ALEX MAYER the XYZ Company want to renewal their Internet contract, so Please send me the mentioned Company Internet charges all summary sheet.
I am looking forward to your response as soon as possible.
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No. Say eg Dear Sir, don't you knnw the person's name? As discussed by email with Alex Mayer, XYZ want to renewal their Internet contract, so please send me their internet charges summary sheet as soon as possible.
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- Say eg Dear Sir, don't you knnw the person's name?
- As discussed by email with Alex Mayer, XYZ want to renewal their Internet contract, so please send me their internet charges summary sheet as soon as possible.
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Say eg
Dear Sir, don't you knnw the person's name?
As discussed by email with Alex Mayer, XYZ want to renewal their Internet contract, so please send me their internet charges summary sheet as soon as possible.
Say eg
Dear Sir, don't you knnw the person's name?
As discussed by email with Alex Mayer, XYZ want to renewal their Internet contract, so please send me their internet charges summary sheet as soon as possible.
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Please help me mine below email. The Marketing department has sent the confirmation report to HQ instead of Finance department, its finance department responsibility, hence I want to reminder to mention department.
Dear [ surname ] please note that the internet Charges amounts incoming and confirmation reporting is dealt with by Finance. you have signed the contract and send the report to
Dear [ surname ] please note that the internet Charges amounts incoming and confirmation reporting is dealt with by Finance. you have signed the contract and send the report to
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Dear Mr Smith,
Please note that incoming internet charges and confirmation reporting are dealt with by Finance. You have signed the contract and send the report to HQ before receiving our confirmation so Finance is not responsible for any problems that may ensue.
Please note that incoming internet charges and confirmation reporting are dealt with by Finance. You have signed the contract and send the report to HQ before receiving our confirmation so Finance is not responsible for any problems that may ensue.
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