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Soheil1 Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
Also
Hello.
Is 'also' used correctly in
Hence, the viewpoints, beliefs, and insights of the carriers of staffs (as a symbolic object), as well as the sociocultural background of its users as representatives of a particular class of society, will be reviewed; and in this cultural setting, the symbolic position and also forms and decorations of modern staffs in that class of society will be expounded. Also, in the continuation, we will seek the artistic-cultural implications of these differences, based on the semiotics approach with the emphasis on the three-category system of Peirce, and also, using the fieldwork, documentary, and library information collecting methods.
Thanks in advance
Is 'also' used correctly in
Hence, the viewpoints, beliefs, and insights of the carriers of staffs (as a symbolic object), as well as the sociocultural background of its users as representatives of a particular class of society, will be reviewed; and in this cultural setting, the symbolic position and also forms and decorations of modern staffs in that class of society will be expounded. Also, in the continuation, we will seek the artistic-cultural implications of these differences, based on the semiotics approach with the emphasis on the three-category system of Peirce, and also, using the fieldwork, documentary, and library information collecting methods.
Thanks in advance
Top answer
You have three "also"s. It seems a bit redundant. You didn't ask for other points of grammar, but here are a few for the first sentence.
- You have three "also"s.
- It seems a bit redundant.
- You didn't ask for other points of grammar, but here are a few for the first sentence.
- Hence, the viewpoints, beliefs, and insights of the carriers of staffs (as a symbolic object (should be plural if this refers to staffs) ), as well as the sociocultural (hyphenate) background of its (ambiguous pronoun) users as representatives of a particular class of society, (no comma) will be reviewed; (New sentence) and in this cultural setting, the symbolic position and also (unnecessary) forms and decorations of modern staffs in that class of society will be expounded.
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You have three "also"s. It seems a bit redundant. You didn't ask for other points of grammar, but here are a few for the first sentence.
Hence, the viewpoints, beliefs, and insights of the carriers of staffs (as a symbolic object (should be plural if this refers to staffs) ), as well as the sociocultural (hyphenate) background of its (ambiguous pronoun) users as repr
Hence, the viewpoints, beliefs, and insights of the carriers of staffs (as a symbolic object (should be plural if this refers to staffs) ), as well as the sociocultural (hyphenate) background of its (ambiguous pronoun) users as repr
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You consistently corrected our other mistakes and this deserves respect.
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