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Already at the entrance to the apartment they discovered that the door handle is loosely connected.
Already at the entrance to the apartment they discovered that the door handle was loosely connected. More natural: As they got to the entrance to the apartment, they discovered that the door handle was loosely connected.
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Already at the entrance to the apartment they discovered that the door handle was loosely connected.
More natural:
As they got to the entrance to the apartment, they discovered that the door handle was loosely connected.