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Musicgold Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

along with one more /along with another

Hi,



Which one of the following sentences is better? If none, could you suggest an improved version?


1. The company along with one more investor purchased a parcel of land in downtown .

2. The company along with another investor purchased a parcel of land in downtown .

3. The company and one more investor purchased a parcel of land in downtown .



Thanks,



MG.
  

Top answer

I would use 2, moving the underlined part to the beginning or the end, most likely to the beginning. Along with another investor, the company purchased a parcel ... The company purchased ...

— CalifJim

  • I would use 2, moving the underlined part to the beginning or the end, most likely to the beginning.
  • Along with another investor, the company purchased a parcel ...
  • The company purchased ...
  • Boston along with another investor.
  • CJ
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I would use 2, moving the underlined part to the beginning or the end, most likely to the beginning.
Along with another investor, the company purchased a parcel ...
The company purchased ... Boston along with another investor.
CJ
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