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Anonymous Posted 6 years ago
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All we could hear was...

All we could hear was Julie screaming and gunfire. It was a very terrifying phone call. But luckily nothing happened to her.

- Is gunfire okay or does shots being fired or maybe something else sound better?

Thank you.

  

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No contest. You need 'shots being fired'. Parallelism!

— CalifJim

  • No contest.
  • You need 'shots being fired'.
  • Parallelism!
  • ing + ing.
  • CJ
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No contest. You need 'shots being fired'. Parallelism! ing + ing. Emotion: smile

CJ

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