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Quỳnh nguyễn Posted 9 years ago
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All about myself

I’m just a beginner of IELTS course and I wanna try to write a bit of myself. You will feel my essay glumsy and I hope you willing to correct my mistake. I always stuck on finding ideas and don’t know how to express. Please help me and thanks in advance.

My name is Diem Quynh, but you can call me Quynh. My name also tell my nation, i’m Vietnamese and i’m Proud of that. I live in a nuclear family with four members including me, my younger brother and my parents. I get on well with them a lot. I have just entered Hanoi university, where students are studied language professionally. My college famous by its friendly environment and multi-culture. I love my university very much.

Besides school time, I spend my time on drawing. I wanna be a designer when i’m Little. It’s my passion. However, it’s just a dream. In addition, I like to hang out with my friends, they are really humorous and kind. Talking with them is the best way to cut down on stresses.

Oh, I’m exhausting on giving ideas... help me

  

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I have highlighted your errors. I’m just a beginner of IELTS course and I wanna try to write a bit of myself. You will feel my essay glumsy and I hope you (missing words) willing to correct my mistake .

  • I have highlighted your errors.
  • I’m just a beginner of IELTS course and I wanna try to write a bit of myself.
  • You will feel my essay glumsy and I hope you (missing words) willing to correct my mistake .
  • ) I always stuck on finding ideas and don’t know how to express (missing word) .
  • Please help me and thanks in advance.
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I have highlighted your errors.

I’m just a beginner of IELTS course and I wanna try to write a bit of myself. You will feel my essay glumsy and I hope you (missing words) willing to correct my mistake. (You should expect that you have made

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