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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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All of the requested amentiies have to be present before move in otherwise contract will be nulled.

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All of the requested amentiies have to be present before move in otherwise contract will be nulled. You have two independent clauses here. I'd suggest a full stop between (period and capital).

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  • All of the requested amentiies have to be present before move in otherwise contract will be nulled.
  • You have two independent clauses here.
  • I'd suggest a full stop between (period and capital).
  • The "have" is fine.
  • " You could also say "before the move in," but I'd call it optional in this sort of language.
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All of the requested amentiies have to be present before move in otherwise contract will be nulled.

You have two independent clauses here. I'd suggest a full stop between (period and capital).

The "have" is fine. ("have to be present" = "must be present")

(I assume this "clause" (legal sense) is insert
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