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Candle guava Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Alignment in a sentense

Hello everyone,

Could someone please tell me if the following sentence is grammatically correct? Something seems off to me, but I'm not sure how to make it better. Thank you so much!

"Like all the choices you make in life, such as a job, marriage, or even a vacation, in your selected college program you may happily find yourself in the right place or sadly in a place where you don’t belong."

  

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It is grammatically correct; however it is a rather cumbersome sentence though.

  • It is grammatically correct; however it is a rather cumbersome sentence though.
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It is grammatically correct; however it is a rather cumbersome sentence though.

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