Akward sentence?
It was great and fun, Mark were the most funniest person in the room, Jane too were not bad, still I cannot phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane.
VS
I had had a great fun, Mark was the most funniest person in the room, Jane too was not bad, still I couldn’t phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane.
These sentences can be written better by adding period and start anew sentence. What I really need to know is, do the second sentence (past perfect) is preferred? Will it not be akward for a sentence to have too many “were” in past simple?
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MeGrammar It was great and fun, Mark were the most funniest person in the room, Jane too were not bad, still I cannot phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane. VS I had had a great fun, Mark was the most funniest person in the room, Jane too was not bad, still I couldn’t phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane. These sentences can be written better by adding period and start anew sentence.
- MeGrammar It was great and fun, Mark were the most funniest person in the room, Jane too were not bad, still I cannot phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane.
- VS I had had a great fun, Mark was the most funniest person in the room, Jane too was not bad, still I couldn’t phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane.
- These sentences can be written better by adding period and start anew sentence.
- What I really need to know is, do the second sentence (past perfect) is preferred?
- Will it not be akward for a sentence to have too many “were” in past simple?
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MeGrammar
It was great and fun, Mark were the most funniest person in the room, Jane too were not bad, still I cannot phantom why John were reluctant to talk about his feeling toward Jane.
VS
I had
0The word is fathom, not phantom.
For a singular subject, say 'was', not 'were'.
Please correct your sentences as much as you can, including correct capitals and punctuation.
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