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Beopro Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Airy

1. Linda's house is too old but still extremely firm. There are no cracks on the walls. Her bedroom is so large that it can contain 45 people. Her house is always airy because of the trees around.

Are these sentences perfect for written English?

Thank you very much, Teachers

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Hi, Linda's house is very old yet extremely secure. In addition, there are no cracks in the walls. Furthermore, her bedroom is so large that it can contain forty five people in it.

  • Hi, Linda's house is very old yet extremely secure.
  • In addition, there are no cracks in the walls.
  • Furthermore, her bedroom is so large that it can contain forty five people in it.
  • Her house is also surrounded by many trees.
  • Maybe this is the reason why it is always airy.
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Hi,

Linda's house is very old yet extremely secure. In addition, there are no cracks in the walls.

Furthermore, her bedroom is so large that it can contain forty five people in it.

Her house is also surrounded by many trees. Maybe this is the reason why it is always airy.

Now it's perfect for written English.
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Hi,

1. Linda's house is very old but still extremely sturdy.

There are no cracks in the walls.

Her bedroom is so large that it can contain 45 people. How do you know? Does she have parties there?
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CliveGrammar OK, but do trees make a house airy? Perhaps you mean 'cool'?
Hi,

I thought he related this assumption to the photosynthesis process.

Nevertheless, I admit it sounds a little odd. Go figure!

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