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Newguest Posted 12 years ago
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This music is a special technology aimed at providing your with more relaxation and helping you release stress.
--- Is the part in bold above correctly written?
This music is a special technology aimed at providing your with more relaxation and helping you release stress.
--- Is the part in bold above correctly written?
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helping you kick back 'provide (more) relaxation' doesn't sound natural to me either. I'd just just write 'aimed at helping you relax'
- helping you kick back 'provide (more) relaxation' doesn't sound natural to me either.
- I'd just just write 'aimed at helping you relax'
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It should be '..aimed at providing you (not your)..helping you kick back
'provide (more) relaxation' doesn't sound natural to me either.
I'd just just write 'aimed at helping you relax'
'provide (more) relaxation' doesn't sound natural to me either.
I'd just just write 'aimed at helping you relax'
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