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Mr1bin Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Agree or disagree?
Please check my wrong grammar
Q. Some people think that having a job in the field that you are interested in is very important. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
My answer
I agree that having a job in the field that you are interested in is very important.
The first reason is that the job that I like makes me work a lot harder. Because I like to work, so it is both good for my company and me.
Another reason is that I don't get stressed out. Even if I get paid less, it is better. Because if I work at a company that I don't like, then I have to spend a lot of money on shopping, drinking etc. to get rid of stress.
For these reasons, I agree with this opinion.
Q. Some people think that having a job in the field that you are interested in is very important. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
My answer
I agree that having a job in the field that you are interested in is very important.
The first reason is that the job that I like makes me work a lot harder. Because I like to work, so it is both good for my company and me.
Another reason is that I don't get stressed out. Even if I get paid less, it is better. Because if I work at a company that I don't like, then I have to spend a lot of money on shopping, drinking etc. to get rid of stress.
For these reasons, I agree with this opinion.
Top answer
Hello, mr1bin. I have been looking at all the test essays you have been submitting, and I want to advise you that you must begin making them longer, with more explanation and detail. htm ] conclusion [/url] that is more than a repeated sentence.
- Hello, mr1bin.
- I have been looking at all the test essays you have been submitting, and I want to advise you that you must begin making them longer, with more explanation and detail.
- htm ] conclusion [/url] that is more than a repeated sentence.
- Spend more time composing your essays.
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Hello, mr1bin.
I have been looking at all the test essays you have been submitting, and I want to advise you that you must begin making them longer, with more explanation and detail. You must also begin devising a [url=http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm]
I have been looking at all the test essays you have been submitting, and I want to advise you that you must begin making them longer, with more explanation and detail. You must also begin devising a [url=http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm]
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First, I am sorry that I have been too late to reply you.
I feel ashamed that even I am an English teacher, but I make a lot of mistakes.
I am teaching my students the easiest way, because they do not have enough time to learn one by one. That is why I taught the skills that is repeating the sentences.
I will try my best and... hope you can still take a look my essays.
I feel ashamed that even I am an English teacher, but I make a lot of mistakes.
I am teaching my students the easiest way, because they do not have enough time to learn one by one. That is why I taught the skills that is repeating the sentences.
I will try my best and... hope you can still take a look my essays.
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