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Abil Posted 18 years ago
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after they ordered

The incident (raid) comes about 11 hours after they ordered the party to close down its office, which was reopened on 17 November, after the government had withdrawn a ban on political activities.

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The raid came about 11 hours after ordering the party to close down its office, which had reopened on November 17th when the government rescinded a ban on political activities.

  • The raid came about 11 hours after ordering the party to close down its office, which had reopened on November 17th when the government rescinded a ban on political activities.
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The raid came about 11 hours after ordering the party to close down its office, which had reopened on November 17th when the government rescinded a ban on political activities.
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