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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

After she recieved an email related of her negotiation

Hello.


Are the following grammatically correct?

After she recieved an email related of her negotiation with Tim, she read the last message.


-"Dear Kellly, aha, aha, aha"

Great! That‘s it! Ok, next weekend I will travel to Indigo city.


Thanks!

  

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I've highlighted the errors. It also does not make sense as a narrative. After she recieved an email related of her negotiation with Tim, she read the last message.

  • I've highlighted the errors.
  • It also does not make sense as a narrative.
  • After she recieved an email related of her negotiation with Tim, she read the last message.
  • -"Dear Kellly , aha, aha, aha" Great!
  • That‘s it!
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I've highlighted the errors. It also does not make sense as a narrative.

After she recieved an email related of her negotiation with Tim, she read the last message.
-"Dear Kellly, aha, aha, aha"
Great! That‘s it! Ok, next weekend I will t

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