After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course
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Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
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Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course would be held, Kelly walked determinedly toward the big house. Once she entered through the front door, she looked for a few minutes to big painting at the entrance of the house.
After observing it with detention, she noticed that the painting was inspired by a landscape of Southern Chile. After that, his gaze settled on the large number of guests who had arrived at the leadership course, where some were checking their cell phones sitting and isolated from the real world, while others had a pleasant conversation.
Chloe, Jim and Vinny were talking. Kelly approached to the group. She asked a Chloe, 39 years old, brunette woman, if she could join the group."
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No. Here is a corrected version. I've also included a couple of non-grammar edits to make it more natural.
- No.
- Here is a corrected version.
- I've also included a couple of non-grammar edits to make it more natural.
- After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course would be held, Kelly walked determinedly toward the big house.
- Once she entered through the front door, she looked for a few minutes at a big painting near the door.
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No. Here is a corrected version. I've also included a couple of non-grammar edits to make it more natural.
After she parked her car in a place near the big house where the leadership course would be held, Kelly walked determinedly toward the big house. Once she entered through the front door, she looked for a few minutes at a big painting near the
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