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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

After putting soap on clothings.

After putting soap on clothings, I wash them with a bucket of water. Then my brother holds one end of the clothing and I hold the other end and then we both twist it so that water get removed from it.

[Note : I don't use washing machine. I manually wash my clothings, so first I put soap by moving my hands(holding soap) up and down against the clothings and the clothings would be full of foams. And in order to dispose off the foams, I wash the clothes using a bucket of water and finally I twist them to dispose off water in them.]

Please correct my sentences.
  

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I've taken the liberty of pretty much rewriting your sentence to make it both understandable and more natural sounding. I wash my clothes by hand using a bucket of water and soap. After washing, my brother and I each take one end of the garment and we wring the water out.

  • I've taken the liberty of pretty much rewriting your sentence to make it both understandable and more natural sounding.
  • I wash my clothes by hand using a bucket of water and soap.
  • After washing, my brother and I each take one end of the garment and we wring the water out.
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I've taken the liberty of pretty much rewriting your sentence to make it both understandable and more natural sounding.

I wash my clothes by hand using a bucket of water and soap. After washing, my brother and I each take one end of the garment and we wring the water out.

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