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Nikitus Posted 10 years ago
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After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited
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Are the followng grammatically correct?
After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited for a moment when the most of the glances of his family pointed to a place that was not near where he was sitting.
looking for something bigger than the birthday appetizers. After he looked around to make sure no one followed him, he decided to open the oven, which is off, but full with sandwiches of ham, cheese and meat which, as the tradition of birthdays dictates, will be deliver later. After Kevin stole the first sandwich, felt a presence just behind him.
A few minutes later he and his father returned to the table. After Ben blowed the candles, the party guest share for a little while and they left. However Kevin’s mother asked Kevin to stay.
Are the followng grammatically correct?
After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited for a moment when the most of the glances of his family pointed to a place that was not near where he was sitting.
looking for something bigger than the birthday appetizers. After he looked around to make sure no one followed him, he decided to open the oven, which is off, but full with sandwiches of ham, cheese and meat which, as the tradition of birthdays dictates, will be deliver later. After Kevin stole the first sandwich, felt a presence just behind him.
A few minutes later he and his father returned to the table. After Ben blowed the candles, the party guest share for a little while and they left. However Kevin’s mother asked Kevin to stay.
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Nikitus Are the followng grammatically correct? It has some problems. I have underlined those areas: After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited for a moment when the most of the glances of his family pointed to a place that was not near where he was sitting.
- Nikitus Are the followng grammatically correct?
- It has some problems.
- I have underlined those areas: After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited for a moment when the most of the glances of his family pointed to a place that was not near where he was sitting.
- looki ng for something bigger than the birthday appetize rs.
- A fter he looked around to make sure no one followed him, he decided to open the oven, which is off, but full with sandwiches of ham, cheese and meat which, as the tradition of birthdays dictates, will be deliver later.
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NikitusAre the followng grammatically correct?It has some problems. I have underlined those areas:
After listening to an interesting conversation at the table, Kevin waited for a moment when the most of the glances of his family pointed to a place that was not near where he was sitting.
looking for something bigger t
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