After he was about to leave his apartment
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Are the following sentences grammatically correct?
"After he was about to leave his apartment, a strong sense of uncertainty invaded him, causing him to go back to his room. He opened a folder and chose a photo of himself. Camila at random which he observed and analyzed for long minutes. Suddenly, I closed his laptop, got up from bed and headed towards the window of his bedroom. Sam watched the sea, appreciating it in all its immensity."
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When Sam was about to leave his apartment, a strong sense of uncertainty invaded him, and he went back to his bedroom. He opened a folder and chose a photo of himself. ) , which he observed for long minutes.
- When Sam was about to leave his apartment, a strong sense of uncertainty invaded him, and he went back to his bedroom.
- He opened a folder and chose a photo of himself.
- ) , which he observed for long minutes.
- ) , got up from his bed and went to the window.
- He watched the sea, appreciating its immensity.
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When Sam was about to leave his apartment, a strong sense of uncertainty invaded him, and he went back to his bedroom. He opened a folder and chose a photo of himself. Camila at random (What does that mean?), which he observed for long minutes. Suddenly, he closed his laptop (When did he open it?),
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