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Too finicky 7 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

AFTER- GRAMMAR?

Are these sentence grammatically correct

- Maine don't sympathise with butchers after what they did to animals.

- Maine don't sympathise with people after what they have done to those animals.

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" isn't right. "people" in the second sentence seems a bit vague, at least with no more context. You also have "those" in one sentence but not in the other.

  • " isn't right.
  • "people" in the second sentence seems a bit vague, at least with no more context.
  • You also have "those" in one sentence but not in the other.
  • The sentence seems less vague with "those" included.
  • I'm not sure if these other things are random differences, and in fact you really want to focus on the tense.
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"Maine don't ..." isn't right. "people" in the second sentence seems a bit vague, at least with no more context. You also have "those" in one sentence but not in the other. The sentence seems less vague with "those" included. I'm not sure if these other things are random differences, and in fact you really want to focus on the tense. If that is the case, let me change it to this:

a) P

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