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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

"After gradudated" or "After graduation"

Hi,

Please tell me which one is better?
1. "After graduation, I luckily got two offer."
or
2."After graduated, I luckily got two offer."

And, which one, the word "got" and "receive" in this situation is better?
  

Top answer

You can say either: After graduation ... OR After I graduated ... However, the rest of the sentence needs work.

— Doctor D

  • You can say either: After graduation ...
  • OR After I graduated ...
  • However, the rest of the sentence needs work.
  • You need to make "offer" plural (there are 2).
  • And "luckily" is awkwardly placed.
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You can say either:
After graduation ...
OR
After I graduated ...

However, the rest of the sentence needs work.
You need to make "offer" plural (there are 2). And "luckily" is awkwardly placed. I think I would say:
Luckily, after graduation, I received two [job] offers.
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